Yesterday was kinda rough... After searching for Chad for hours, we
finally linked up in the hills of northeastern Elektro. I had been
laying around for half an hour in a ghillie suit that I pulled out of a
stranger's tent. The ghillie suit had been covering a marksman's rifle,
which I relieved the stranger of as well. Once Chad and I met up, we
moved from the safety of high ground and descended into the city
streets.
We spotted a power plant with a large fire station on the
same block with an empty paved lot separating the two structures. We
figured the station might be a good place to scavenge. We checked each
floor carefully as we searched for supplies and when we reached the top,
I kept watch while Chad foraged through a few more lockers.
I was
enjoying the deceptive safety of our elevation, keeping one eye on the
staircase and the other on the view, when some desperate idiot with a
fire axe burst in and struck a glancing blow off Chads shoulder. The
blade, dulled by the skulls of the undead, only managed to bruise Chad's
shoulder through his thick leather jacket. He hadn't managed to retract
the axe for a second swing before I unloaded all but one bullet from my
rifle into his chest and throat.
To say I was rattled would be an
understatement and Chad was in a panic, wondering just how much damage
had been done by the axe. "What if it cut me?! He used it on them!" he cried in a hoarse whisper. I held up my hand to Chad and laid prone. He quickly understood and did the same.
There
was only silence. We laid there for what felt like hours. The
attacker's body had bled out leaving a dark red pool under his upper
body. Some of the blood had run down the staircase, creating crimson
streaks around the corner of the opening. We had no way of knowing if
the corpse would turn or if he had managed to find us unscathed. We
hadn't said a word to each other since I had silenced Chad. I looked
over at him and his eyes were locked on the fallen attacker. He had the
look of a predator. The silence must have calmed him.
I extended
my arm to tap his shoulder, causing my ghillie suit to drag and rustle
on the concrete. He inhaled sharply, but quietly as did something on the
floor below. There was a sound of soft footsteps that came closer to
the staircase. I put my had on the floor and pushed myself up slowly
while keeping my rifle leveled at the opening. I brought my foot under
my body and planted it, staying still for a few moments. The something
downstairs must have heard me, because there had been nothing but
silence from the lower level.
Slowly and carefully, I moved to the
staircase with my gun pointed at it. I glanced back at Chad who had his
rifle on the corpse I was stepping over. The opening was just in front
of me and I quickly leaned forward to check for the something we had
heard earlier. Nothing was there. I carefully proceeded down the stairs,
the metal steps creaking and clanking as I stepped. I had gotten
halfway when I turned the check the corner under the staircase and saw
what I least expected: a terrified woman in her late twenties with body
armor gripping an MP5. Before I could open my mouth she opened fire,
spraying bullets into the staircase and into my left leg. I rushed back
up the steps and limped into the corner next to Chad who was now
crouched.
I slumped back against the wall and did the best I could
to hold my gun steady, but my trembling hands betrayed my intentions.
Only seconds had passed when she rushed in spraying another 30 rounds at
me. Her aim faltered when Chad and I fired back. She disappeared back
down the stairs and fell silent once more, no doubt waiting for us to
come after her.
I suddenly lost strength and realized that her aim
had been a little better than I had previously thought. Darkness
swirled into my vision, moving like black dye in a clear glass of water.
I crumbled to the floor feeling only a dull thud when I hit. All of the
strength I had left was dedicated to searching for Chad with my failing
eyes and ears. I heard the faint sound of a magazine clacking into a
gun, but it sounded as if it had been done underwater. The iron-like
smell of blood reached was thick around me. I felt my rifle tugged from
under my powerless body and heard dull thuds on the floor as boots
stepped away from me. I couldn't move, let alone see who had taken it
from me.
As I lay there dying, my heart broke. I had failed to
protect my little brother. I wished for just a few more minutes of time
and second guessed the actions I had taken a few minutes before. My last
hope was that Chad's end had been quicker than mine. I fought to move,
to reach out and hold him but I couldn't. My vision had blurred to the
point of blindness and my arms were impossibly heavy. He was all I had.
Despair
had consumed me entirely when a half a dozen shots rang out from my
rifle, their concussive report amplified by the concrete walls. A second
or two separated each shot; they were carefully aimed. I waited to be
finished off by the shooter, a prisoner in my limp, powerless body.
Rather than falling into oblivion I was lifted up and cradled by the
rifleman. "Ian," said Chad, "I got 'em."
Good job I liked it. The only thing i would suggest is to make an intro to your story. It kinda felt like you just jumped right in,and if you weren't familiar with the game its kind of confusing. Also you need to have a follow link on your blog or people reading have to manually go to their blogger account and type in your url. Most people are too lazy o do that so they just won't follow you at all.
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